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01 独立口语

A big company is now considering building a new factory in your city. Some support this because more job opportunities could be created, while others oppose this plan because there will be more pollution. What do you think about this? 

思路解析

答法一:Agree

理由①:可以促进当地的经济的发展,带动经济增长,比如产能或者商品的产出;创造税收给政府。

表达关键词:

promote the growth/prosperity of local ecomomy;output;product;create the revenue for local gavornment; 

理由②:提供就业机会,维护社会稳定,比如刚毕业的人可以提供工作机会,现在的工作压力很大,社会竞争(competition) 激烈(fierce  adj.)

表达关键词:

provide more job opportunities; maintain social stability; to relieve the pressure of fierce competition;

答法二:Disagree

理由①:污染环境,给当地居民生活造成影响,比如会排放污水,污染河流,影响居民的身体健康,造成身体方面的疾病,比如肠道疾病。

表达关键词:

sewage emission;to exhaust the air pollution; to cause diseases such as intestines problem; 

理由②:造成本地公司的相互竞争,压缩成本,比如人工成本,破坏发展的平衡。

表达关键词:

to cause competition among local companies, in order to cut the cost, such as the artificialcost; to break the balance of development

理由③:工厂会占用土地,破坏当地的风景,造成城市面貌的破坏;比如之前是草坪或公园,现在变成了工厂,会导致城市界面不好看,人们居住的环境也会变差。

表达关键词:

to occupy land, to destroy the local scenery/ to damage the cityspace; lawn; lead to an unattractive urban interface; the living evironment will be worse; 

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02 学术讨论写作

1月20日 学术讨论 新题

Dr. Achebe

As teachers play an invaluable role in shaping young minds and preparing students for the future, there is an ongoing discussion regarding their compensation. Some argue that teachers should be paid salaries comparable to other high-earning professionals like doctors, lawyers and business executives. Do you agree or disagree that teachers deserve salaries on par with these professions? Please explain your viewpoint.

Claire:

Teachers should receive salaries on par with other high-earning professionals. They work long hours preparing lessons, grading assignments, and supporting students. Without good teachers, we wouldn't have doctors, lawyers, and executives. If we want to attract the best talent to this invaluable profession, we must compensate teachers accordingly. My favorite teachers inspired me and contributed greatly to my success.

Andrew:

I don't think teachers deserve the same high salaries as doctors or lawyers. Teachers get so much time off, with summer vacations and other long breaks. My aunt is a teacher and she's always posting on Facebook about trips she takes or sleeping in during vacations. With all that time off, teachers shouldn't earn salaries on par with year-round demanding professions.

思路解析

题目类型:对立题型

支持:支持Claire

论述逻辑:老师帮助迷失自我的学生---学生重回正轨---重新获得机会---有益于社会---老师贡献巨大应该得到高薪回报

teachers help students who have lost themselves---students get back on track---gain opportunities---benefit society---teachers make great contributions and should be rewarded with high salaries

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