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11.11/12托福 | 双十一后探讨“过度消费”?
2023/11/14 11:05:22

11日、12日的托福考试考情今天来咯!双十一刚刚结束,托福也来考大家"excessive consumption"?一起来看看这两天考试的口语Task1解析及学术讨论范文!

托福口语和写作都需要长期持续的练习,此系列文将持续为大家分享后续每场托福考试的独立口语备考思路解析及写作部分的参考范文

01 独立口语

11月11日 Task1 

Parents should not read their children's text messages and e-mails without their permission.

思路解析

答法一:Agree

理由①:阻止不适当的内容,比如说网络诈骗,或者对孩子身心健康有害的内容,对孩子造成消极影响,如果父母发现有不良信息可以及时阻止。

表达关键词

prevent...from doing

inappropriate

content

cyber fraud

do harm to children's physical and mental health have a negative influence/impact on sth.

to filter illegal or harmful information

理由②:了解孩子使用电子设备的时间和上网时间,防止学生沉迷于电子设备;比如说,通过短信发送的时间可以判断出孩子使用手机的时长,以防孩子对电子设备上瘾。

表达关键词

electronic device

be addicted to...

be indulged in

text message

in case

答法二:Disagree

理由①:侵犯儿童的隐私——比如说,自己的短信被父母看过后会有不舒服的感觉,每个孩子都需要隐私空间,需要被尊重。

表达关键词

an invasion of privacy

to intrude on kids' private lives

private or personal space

Respect

理由②:会伤害父母和孩子之间的关系——有时候孩子们和父母的观点会不一样,当孩子们与同龄人交流的信息被父母了解后可能会造成争吵,伤害父母与孩子之间的感情。

表达关键词

to hurt the relationship between parents and children

different points/views/perspectives

peers

to cause an argument

lead to/ result in emotional damage 

11月12日Task1 

Your university requires that you take a history course, and you have two options that fit your schedule. The first course is taught by a professor who is well-known for being a good lecturer and includes little to no class discussion. The second course is led by a professor who rarely lectures and instead encourages students to contribute to class discussions. Which course would you choose to fulfill your history requirement and why? Use details and examples to explain your opinion.

思路解析

答法一:选择经验丰富但互动少的教授

理由①:课堂效率可以更高——因为教授有多年的授课经验,所以对课堂材料的了解,以及对上课流程的把握会更加熟练,因此可以在相同的课程时长中传授更多的知识。

表达关键词

teaching experience

course material

syllabus

flow in the classroom

classroom procedure

familiar with

no stranger to

pass on

理由②:更融洽的师生关系——因为教授在多年的教学生涯中遇到过各种类型的学生,所以能够轻松做到在和学生沟通的过程中找到正确的方式。

表达关键词

on good terms

establish rapport

encounter

career

effortless

Approach

答法二:选择经验不丰富但是互动多的教授

理由①:课堂效率可以更高——因为课堂上老师会进行很多有趣的课堂活动,所以学生们更加积极踊跃的参与,进而提升学习的效率。

⭐表达关键词

attentive

classroom activities

group discussions

group assignments

enthusiastic

eager

take an active part in

理由②:更融洽的师生关系——因为教授在课上会不断和学生进行互动,所以老师会更加了解每个学生的性格特点,这样在其他的交流中也会更加顺利。

表达关键词

interaction

regular

constantly

disposition

temperament

effortless

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02 学术讨论写作

11月11日学术讨论 

全球国际化背景下,不同国家间的"difference"是越来越大了还是缩小了?

重复2023.10.29家考原题

Differences between people from different countries are increasing or diminishing.

Question:

Your professor is teaching a class on international relations. Write a post respondingto the professor's question.

In your response, you should do the following:

-Express and support your opinion.

-Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.

An effective response will contain at least 100 words.

Dr. Diaz

With so many opportunities to connect nowadays, some people believe that no matter which country we come from, we have more similarities than we have differences. However, others have observed that differences between themselves and people from other countries are growing. In your view, are differences between people from different countries increasing, or are they diminishing? Why?

Andrew

I think the differences among us are decreasing as our exposure to products fromother countries grows. We can enjoy food from any country. We can watch movies made in faraway places.We can go to a store and buy authentic goods from around the world. These things become part of our normal life and make our differences seem smaller.

Kelly

understand what Andrew is saying, but for some people, being exposed to differences makes them retreat into their own corner even more. Look at social media.We are exposed to many different people and ideas, but a lot of people talk to only those they agree with and ignore the rest.This only makes the differences between people increase.

思路解析

① 看完题目后,挑选出两位同学中可以回应的各一句话/一个点:

Kelly:a lot of people talk to only those they agree with and ignore the rest.

Andrew:our exposure to products from other countries grows.

② 对部分引用内容进行完善:

Kelly:in social media, numerous people talk to only those they agree with and ignore the rest.

③ 对应各自内容进行延伸/反驳:

反驳Kelly的思路:有越来越多的社交平台 -> 越来越多的人分享生活 -> 其他人可能会参照。

延伸Andrew的思路:利用交通 -> 人们在不同国家体验生活 -> 有机会向他人学习 -> 产生更多相似点。

④ 例子,对应延伸或反驳的内容其中之一去举例:

对应“延伸Andrew的内容”:

例子的中心思想——某人出国接触到了新事物,模仿并应用在自己的生活中。

参考范文

11月12日学术讨论

"excessive consumption"过度/过量消费,是否是个严重的问题?

Dr. Gupta

We've been discussing the idea that human well-being is not necessarily improved by ever-increasing production and consumption of goods and services. Some people argue that humans already consume too many goods, from clothing to electronics to food; they believe that excessive consumption has created serious problems for humanity and even the planet. Do you agree that excessive consumption--buying more than we truly need--has become a serious problem? Why or why not?

Paul

I absolutely agree. We buy far more than we need, and that can't continue indefinitely. For years people have used shopping as a form of recreation. The products bought on a whim are filling up landfills, and the energy expended producing the goods has created a global warming crisis. We should start gradually reducing consumption.

Claire

I disagree with the idea that over-consumption is a dramatic problem. l agree there is some overconsumption, but it happens mostly with wealthy people. I think in general almost everyone else already buys only what they need. In fact, many people around the world are not even able to obtain everything they need.

思路解析

分析题目“过度消费是否是一个问题”?

如果同意,常见的思路是过度消费导致了......(不好的后果)。

如果不同意,常见的思路是,过度消费导致了......(好的后果)。

后面范文里,老师的态度是同意。

具体论证

过度消费的原因是很多人为了省钱,所以买了超过实际需求的东西。而这些东西往往不用就会丢掉,从而导致资源浪费。

参考范文

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