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01 独立口语
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Schools should spend as much time teaching students about world history as they do teaching students about the history of their own countries. Use examples and details to explain your answer. (重复2023.8.29)
思路解析
答法一:学习世界历史
可以学习不同的文化,拓宽视野——如果我们学习了世界历史,可以了解不同国家的文化,学习当地的文化,包括语言,宗教,风俗等等不同的文化内涵,帮助我们拓展自己的知识面,丰富自己的视野。
表达关键词
to learn different cultures / to broaden our horizon; dialect, accent, religion, knowledge, culture diversity
增强文化同理心,更加客观地看待问题——学习世界历史可以了解不同国家在不同阶段发生的故事,更好地理解当地文化,比如看到一些国际实时新闻,能够更加客观地看待这些问题。
表达关键词
to be more tolerant to accept different history and cultures / to have more empathy / to analyze an issue more critically,international issue, trending topics, the most popular hashtags
答法二:只学习本国文化
可以更好地传承和宣扬本国文化——通过学习本国历史,文化得到很好地传承,尤其是中国有着几千年的历史文化,通过学习历史可以更好地了解本国。
表达关键词
inherit
advocate
to have a better understand of
增加民众的文化身份认同感——通过学习本国历史,可以增强学生或民众对于本国文化地认可度和文化自信。
表达关键词
to form own culture identity / cultural recognition;to build up culture confidence
02 学术讨论写作
你认为征收税收和罚款是阻止公司破坏环境的好方法吗? (重复2023.8.26)
Many companies provide important products and services but at the same time cause environmental damage. Some people believe the way to prevent these companies from damaging the environment is for the government to require more penalties from them, such as higher taxes and larger fines. Do you think it is a good idea?
Andrew:
A lot of companies make helpful products but hurt the environment too. I think the government should punish them more, like raising their taxes and fines, to stop the damage. Doing that would hold corporations accountable and force them to change in an impactful way. We can have both innovation and sustainability if governments incentivize it properly through penalties.
Claire:
I disagree that we should penalize corporations more for environmental damage. Many companies are already taking steps to adopt greener practices, and higher taxes or fines could discourage innovation and hurt the economy. Instead of punishing businesses, I think the government should reward and incentivize sustainable choices through subsidies and tax breaks.
思路解析
1.看完题目后,挑选出两位同学中可以回应的各一句话/一个点:
Andrew--Doing that would hold corporations accountable and force them to change in an impactful way.
Claire--higher taxes or fines could discourage innovation and hurt the economy.
2. 对应各自内容进行延伸/反驳:
反驳Andrew的思路--该行为不一定会让公司负责或做出改变 -> 公司可能会涨价 -> 有损消费者的利益
延伸Claire的思路:其它缺点——高税收还可能会导致逃税等违法行为
3. 例子,对应延伸或反驳的内容其中之一去举例
对应“反驳Andrew的内容”:
例子的中心思想——公司为了环保而涨价。
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