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托福考试综合写作怎么写满分？需要注意什么？

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托福改革在即，对于之前老独立写作犯难的同学来说，是一个好消息。因为再也不用揪着头发思考论点了，但同时综合写作依旧保留，对于这个部分我们还是应该非常重视。那么到底怎么写满分呢？来跟着澜大教育小澜老师深入研究一下。

从评分标准来看，综合写作是按照三个维度评分的。

听力细节的完整度
语法
逻辑

许多同学对于综合写作的得分点有误解：

听力细节的完整度是zui重要的一个维度，这里语法指的是基本语法和时态问题，而逻辑指的是细节与细节之间的逻辑。也就是说很多同学觉得自己考不到高分，是因为语法不好，或者句式不多样，但其实可能是因为你的听力细节没有还原完整，并且逻辑不对。我们拿一篇TPO的作文为例：

TPO 44 综合写作

我们先来看一下阅读部分的第1段

In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to North America by European explorers known as the Norse, who traveled across the Atlantic Ocean and came into contact with Native Americans almost a thousand years ago.

However, some archaeologists believe that the coin is not a genuine piece of historical evidence but a historical fake; they think that the coin was placed at the site recently by someone who wanted to mislead the public. There are three main reasons why some archaeologists believe that the coin is not genuine historical evidence.

熟悉综合写作的同学应该知道，我们只需要找出阅读主旨就好了，即“ There are three main reasons why some archaeologists believe that the coin is not genuine historical evidence.”，简单来说，就是有一种银币，有三个原因认为这种银币不是一个真实的历史证据。

同理，我们看一下阅读的第1个分论点

Great Distance from Norse Settlements

First, the Native American site in Maine where the coin was discovered is located very far from other sites documenting a Norse presence in North America. Remains of Norse settlements have been discovered in far eastern Canada. The distance between the Maine site and the Norse settlements in Canada is more than a thousand kilometers, suggesting the coin has no real connection with the settlements.

找出阅读分论点1“The distance between the Maine site and the Norse settlements in Canada is more than a thousand kilometers, suggesting the coin has no real connection with the settlements.”

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重点来了，我们看一下听力原文对应阅读分论点1，以及需要写到的三个听力细节。

First, the great distance of the Maine site from the Norse settlements in Canada. Well, many other objects found at that same Native American site had come from faraway places. Not just the coin. There's a perfectly reasonable historical explanation for these objects. The Native Americans who lived at the Maine site traveled great distances within North America. They were interested in obtaining objects from faraway places. The Native Americans could have reached the Norse settlements during their travels and brought the silver coin back to Maine.

听力细节1“many other objects found at that same Native American site had come from faraway places. Not just the coin. ”，许多同样在native american site找到的东西都从很远的地方来，不光是硬币。

听力细节2“The Native Americans who lived at the Maine site traveled great distances within North America. They were interested in obtaining objects from faraway places. ”Native Americans 在北美内穿越过很远的距离。他们对于从远距离获得东西很感兴趣。

听力细节3“The Native Americans could have reached the Norse settlements during their travels and brought the silver coin back to Maine.”Native Americans可能到达Norse settlements，并且可以带回来硬币。

当然了，我们同学在真实考试的时候没有办法一字不漏的写出听力原文，所以我们大部分情况都是paraphrase，那么我们找一位同学的作文看看他有哪些问题。

First of all, the reading material argues that the Norse settlements were very far away from the Native American site in Maine. On the contrary, the listening material points out that there are some evidences that the Norse went to the Maine. In fact, they have great interests to obtain the things from far away. Therefore, it is likely for Norse to bring the coin to the Maine.

首先，这位同学的听力细节从”there are some evidences that the Norse went to the Maine.”这里开始，意思是有证据证明Norse去了Maine，但是和原文的听力细节1“许多同样在native american site找到的东西都从很远的地方来，不光是硬币”不同，所以此处有1个听力细节遗漏。

再来看一下他写的第二个听力细节，”In fact, they have great interests to obtain the things from far away.”,这里写到了对于获取东西感兴趣，和原文的“Native Americans 在北美内穿越过很远的距离。他们对于从远距离获得东西很感兴趣。”有一部分重合，但是前面一句话没有写到，所以此处有0.5个听力细节遗漏。

第三个听力细节“Therefore, it is likely for Norse to bring the coin to the Maine.”和原文的“Native Americans可能到达Norse settlements，并且可以带回来硬币。”基本意思相同，所以没有遗漏。

从这一段来看，这位同学已经有1.5个听力细节遗漏了，但是值得表扬的是他有in fact， therefore等逻辑关系词，这些逻辑关系词同样重要。

所以如果这一段想写满分的话，首先上面三个听力细节不能有任何遗漏，其次我们需要注意细节与细节之间的逻辑关系，比如听力细节1和听力细节2是因果关系，我们可以写成“听力细节1，because 听力细节2”。而听力细节3是一个结论，我们可以写成“Therefore，听力细节3”。这里还要注意时态问题。

满分示范：

First of all, the reading material mentions the distance between the Maine site and the Norse settlements in Canada is more than a thousand kilometers, suggesting the coin has no real connection with the settlements. However, the listening contends that there were many other objects found at the same site which had come from far away places, not just coins, because Native Americans liked to obtain objects from far away places, and they travelled great distances. Therefore, the Native American probably had reached Norse settlements and brought the coin back.

如果我们每一段都可以做到细节完整，没有语法错误，逻辑关系完整的话，满分指日可待哦！

以上就是托福考试需要注意点，有需要了解托福考试信息，可在线咨询小澜老师，或关注澜大教育官网。

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